More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In our contemporary world,

hefty proportion

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a hefty proportion

of people have been confronted with obesity.

This

health

issues

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issue

may be addressed through

accreument

the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises

agreement

of junk food

prices according

Accept comma addition

prices, according

to plethora of people's notion. I strongly disagree with

this

remedy because of numerous cogent reasons on below. Perhaps it should be acknowledged that, drawing attention of consumers for fast foods, which are roots of

overweightness

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweights

, may fail due to the high prices. Needless to say, if

this

initiative had been launched,

vast majority

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the vast majority

of

cutomers

someone who pays for goods or services

customers

would have forsaken

this

sort of foods.

This

initiative,

however

, would call for astronomic prices to be valid and impactful due to addictive attribute of junk foods.

Consequently

, myriad of inhabitants, who cannot afford no more, may cease consuming junk foods and

instead

commence to seek alternative more healthy options. On the minus side,

rest

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the rest

of people, for whom these foods are available due to their abundance, still suffer.

Hence

,

this

approach cannot be panacea at all. In terms of possible alternatives, the acquaintance of necessary knowledge about

this

difficulties

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difficulty

and how to cope with them, may be

large step

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a large step

toward sole solution. To illustrate that, making people aware with

this

heartbreaking advancement's adverse

effects

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effect

on human body via massive media or

increasement number

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an increasement number

of sport

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

centres

and draw citizens' attention to

this

places

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place

would be

perfect example

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a perfect example

the perfect example

perfect examples

of that sort of

initiavtives

readiness to embark on bold new ventures

initiative

.

Therefore

, people start to tackle with obesity on their own, which is supreme advantage. The conclusion to be drawn is that, making efforts to eradicate

this

by only one side cannot be

adequate

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adequately

and

instead

of that, patients should take responsibility on their own and take care

for

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of

themselves.