Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many hold the opinion that life threatening physical activities should be illegal,
in contrast
, others believe in freedom of choice. Both these opposing views will be discussed in
essay, followed by a reasoned
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
. On the one hand, dare devil sports
as, motorcycle racing are very common amongst many people.
, it is thought by many that they should not be allowed, due to the
existing in possibility
risks they may possess.
can be in the form of fatal accidents and broken bones.
For example
, in 2012, Formula 1 reported an average of 86 racers lost their lives and ended up handicapped because of the nature of these activities. Undoubtedly, if these racers were held back, they wouldn't be in any accidents. If they do not know what's best for them, authorities
should makes
should make
these decisions for them.
On the other hand
, those that participate in dangerous sports are usually very well trained in their fields, with many years of experience.
, they
have a medical team on standby at all times, in the case of accidents. For these reasons, a choice should exist.
In addition
, everyone has their own free will,
, laws should not
issue commands or orders for
people's personal choices.
For instance
, many sportsmen have pledged their lives to a cause
as, winning the 2014, winter
of or relating to the Olympic Games
games in danger sports.
, they have put in a lot of time and effort into practicing for them, In conclusion
Accept space
there is much debate on whether or not dangerous sports should be banned,
refers to the speaker or writer
believe that people should have the right to decide whatever they want to do.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • engagement
  • incentives
  • obesity
  • recreation
  • well-being
  • peer pressure
  • physical fitness
  • endurance
  • balance
  • teamwork
  • coordination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • discipline
  • facilities
  • accessible
  • affordable
  • curriculum
  • extracurricular
  • inclusion
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