On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to claim the loss of my
camera
. I lost a
Cannon
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D95 digital
camera
, model 2015, which valued 1000 dollars, along with a Cannon 90mm enhanced lens, which valued 500 dollars. Here is how it happened.
Last
weekend, my family and I went to the beach for vacation. It went on well that day
,
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until we took several drinks at a bar on the way home at Lincoln Street. When we were leaving, I forgot the
camera
. It was until the
next
morning, I realized the
camera
was still at the bar, and I went back immediately.
However
, the
camera
had already gone. Nobody at the bar was aware of
this
. It was confirmed lost. I wonder how the claim process would be like. I have the vouchers for the
camera
and lens, would it be sufficient? What form do I need to
fill in
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? Could you send me the necessary documents at your earliest convenience? Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Smith
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