Some people think that it is better to live in vertical city (mean that people work and live in high buildings) while others think a horizontal city is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions vary on whether it is more advantageous to settle
in
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with
vertical
city
rather than a horizontal
city
,
although
I can understand the reason why some people would like to live in a horizontal
city
, I am of opinion that living in a vertical
city
is more suitable. It is undeniable that there are many benefits to work and live in a horizontal
city
to some extent. One of the major
reason
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reasons
is safety from natural disasters as earthquakes. Given that, it is easier to escape from a collapsed
house
than a high building, people can feel safer to live on the ground and not take a lot of effort to protect themselves when earthquakes happen. Another point is that makes it possible to build up the
house
with no upstairs
to
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in
the bi-level
house
when
this
owner affords to reconstruct. Despite the aforementioned argument, I believe
settlement
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the settlement
in
highrise
used of buildings of many stories equipped with elevators; tall
high-rise
high rise
buildings is more substantial related to space saving and the fact that enjoys the extraordinary views from the high level. Regarding the former, there are less and
fewer
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less
clearings for building a
house
while there is an increasing the flux of immigrants
to
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in
urban areas, as a results housing shortage. Because of that, apartments in high buildings
is
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are
a suitable solution. The other beneficial element is people can enjoy
sightseeings especially
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sightseeing, especially
sightseeing especially
sight-seeing especially
the vivid lights at night,
for example
, Ho Chi Minh
city
has
sleepness inner
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a sleepy inner city
sleepy inner city
sleepiness inner city
city
, people can not admire these when they in a low-level height. To conclude, there are many benefits of the horizontal
city
for accommodations and workplaces, I think that vertical
city
is taken into consideration for a satisfactory choice for living and working.
Submitted by Thanh on

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