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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.

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Majority
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The majority
 takes the side of studying
wide range
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a wide range
 of subjects while others think that studying specific subjects is more valuable. According to me, learning particular
subject
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 is more beneficial than that of many subjects because at the university
level
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. The difficulty of subjects increases that
its
it is
it's
 hard to
study
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 them altogether
.
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 Along with, choosing specific subjects will help in making bright
career
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.
To begin
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 with, until one university
level
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, the subjects require deep
study
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 and if we
study
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 many subjects simultaneously, the chances of scoring good marks in every
subject
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 decrease.
Besides
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,
level
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 of difficulty increases and
its
it is
it's
 hard to concentrate on each
subject
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 properly. To illustrate, Times of India reported that more than 70% of the IIT students score less marks due to studying
wide range
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a wide range
 of difficult subjects. Learning a particular
subject
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 enhances knowledge in that
subject
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 and it will
further
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 help in making their
career
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 in the same. By working on
same
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the same subject
subject
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 for years makes one proficient and it opens ample of opportunities
,
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,
 which fills their
career
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 with success. The finest example of which is Dr. Shashi Tharoor, who chose political science as his
subject
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 and works on it for years and become a renowned well-known personality. To sum up, it is always better to
chose
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choose
subject
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 specific
study
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 rather than studying many subjects because every
subject
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 at university
level
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 is difficult which makes it hard for students to learn it altogether. Single
subject
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study
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 supplies a good
career
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 with maximum success rate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • well-rounded education
  • interdisciplinary
  • innovation
  • critical thinking
  • adaptability
  • specialization
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