Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.

Majority
Suggestion
The majority
takes the side of studying
wide range
Suggestion
a wide range
of subjects while others think that studying specific subjects is more valuable. According to me, learning particular
subject
is more beneficial than that of many subjects because at the university
level
. The difficulty of subjects increases that
its
it is
it's
hard to
study
them altogether
.
Accept space
.
Along with, choosing specific subjects will help in making bright
career
.
To begin
with, until one university
level
, the subjects require deep
study
and if we
study
many subjects simultaneously, the chances of scoring good marks in every
subject
decrease.
Besides
,
level
of difficulty increases and
its
it is
it's
hard to concentrate on each
subject
properly. To illustrate, Times of India reported that more than 70% of the IIT students score less marks due to studying
wide range
Suggestion
a wide range
of difficult subjects. Learning a particular
subject
enhances knowledge in that
subject
and it will
further
help in making their
career
in the same. By working on
same
Suggestion
the same subject
subject
for years makes one proficient and it opens ample of opportunities
,
Accept space
,
which fills their
career
with success. The finest example of which is Dr. Shashi Tharoor, who chose political science as his
subject
and works on it for years and become a renowned well-known personality. To sum up, it is always better to
chose
Suggestion
choose
subject
specific
study
rather than studying many subjects because every
subject
at university
level
is difficult which makes it hard for students to learn it altogether. Single
subject
study
supplies a good
career
with maximum success rate.

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