Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
In today's era, advertisement is
one
of the most efffective
strategy to attract the customers for any producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
affective
evocative
enterprenaur
. Some someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
beleives
that publicity by means of advertisement encourages customers to buy products Suggestion
believe
believes
believed
that is
even not required, while others beleive
that advertisement helps us to introduce the new collection which enhance our lives. Based on the below mentioned views, I agree that advertising is just an unnecessary accept as true; take to be true
believe
way
to create a requirement in an individual's mind.
To embark on, people nowadays have a good access to internet, televisions and other media that displays
a plethora of redundant advertisements, Suggestion
display
however
in past decades, public hardly had media
available to view produced by a manufacturing process
made
such
advertisements to get attracted,
even though Accept space
,
public
were able to Suggestion
the public
fulfill
their requirements without any compromise. In my perspective, advertisements are not only the option to influence customers about a requirement, put in effect
fulfil
it infact
, just inculcate the need of any Accept comma addition
it, in fact
it in fact
product
by emphasising more and more features,
which sometimes even missed in actual products. Accept space
,
For instance
, if one
is looking for buying a car, there are lot
of relevant options and popups like car coverSuggestion
lots
,
seat covers and other accessories by which customer Accept space
,
atleast
would find it as Suggestion
at least
one
of the need
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neediest
alongwith
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along with
car
. Suggestion
the car
Hence
advertisements are just a way
,
that triggers frequently to divert the mind of customers.
Accept space
,
Moreover
, traditional way
of buying products are
quite Suggestion
is
effective
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an effective way
way
because one
can easily look and feel the product
physically,
but these daysAccept space
,
,
the competition is extremely highAccept space
,
,
which results in multiple options Accept space
,
one
can choose. For example
, there are enormous number
of online websites, Suggestion
an enormous number
besides
which there are various offers for complimentary gifts specific to a product
, which indeed is not the need of a customer, whereas a customer goes for an offer by considering the need of other product
can be there in future, which is just a wastage for that moment of time.
In a nutshell,
if people buy things onlineAccept space
,
,
they tend to create extra requirements for themselves and buy Accept space
,
unnecssary
products by getting attracted from various offers which actually is a market strategy to influence buyers.not necessary
unnecessary
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