Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In today's era, advertisement is
one
of the most
efffective
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
affective
evocative
strategy to attract the customers for any
enterprenaur
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
. Some
beleives
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believe
believes
believed
that publicity by means of advertisement encourages customers to buy products
that is
even not required, while others
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that advertisement helps us to introduce the new collection which enhance our lives. Based on the below mentioned views, I agree that advertising is just an unnecessary
way
to create a requirement in an individual's mind. To embark on, people nowadays have a good access to internet, televisions and other media that
displays
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display
a plethora of redundant advertisements,
however
in past decades, public hardly had
media
produced by a manufacturing process
made
available to view
such
advertisements to get attracted
,
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,
even though
public
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the public
were able to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their requirements without any compromise. In my perspective, advertisements are not only the option to influence customers about a requirement,
it infact
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it, in fact
it in fact
, just inculcate the need of any
product
by emphasising more and more features
,
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,
which sometimes even missed in actual products.
For instance
, if
one
is looking for buying a car, there are
lot
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lots
of relevant options and popups like car cover
,
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,
seat covers and other accessories by which customer
atleast
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at least
would find it as
one
of the
need
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neediest
alongwith
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along with
car
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the car
.
Hence
advertisements are just a
way
,
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,
that triggers frequently to divert the mind of customers.
Moreover
, traditional
way
of buying products
are
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is
quite
effective
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an effective way
way
because
one
can easily look and feel the
product
physically
,
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,
but these days
,
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,
the competition is extremely high
,
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,
which results in multiple options
one
can choose.
For example
, there are
enormous number
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an enormous number
of online websites,
besides
which there are various offers for complimentary gifts specific to a
product
, which indeed is not the need of a customer, whereas a customer goes for an offer by considering the need of other
product
can be there in future, which is just a wastage for that moment of time. In a nutshell
,
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,
if people buy things online
,
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,
they tend to create extra requirements for themselves and buy
unnecssary
not necessary
unnecessary
products by getting attracted from various offers which actually is a market strategy to influence buyers.
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