In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe ing it is more important do protect the countryside and not build new homes there what is your opinion about this ?

Most of the country's Population
have been increasing
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has been increasing
year after year.
Moreover
, there has been an
ennumerous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
increase in the number of houses because of the increase in population. Due to the lack of space for new building, people choose
countryside
to furnish their dream house. Some of the people who
are very nostalgic choose
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are very nostalgic choosing
have very nostalgic chosen
are very nostalgic chosen
are very nostalgic choose
those
plural of "this"
these
types of places for their homes. Some people argue that, protection of
countryside
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the countryside
is very important and don't allow to build homes in country side.
First
and foremost thing is that,
countryside
is a beautiful
place
and low population
.
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.
People choose these types of places to settle in their future life
.
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.
Countryside
is a
place
with beautiful sceneries, environment
,
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,
low on pollution, etc. People who love
nature
choose Places with lots of trees, flowers etc.Some research Students found that people who are
after
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over
Retirement age like to keep pets and grow agricultural plants
,
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,
choose
countryside
because they need quiet calm and peaceful
place
for their future life. The
fack
a piece of information about circumstances that exist or events that have occurred
fact
is that, life in peaceful
countryside
increases positivity and reduce depression.
Conversely
,
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,
it is true that
,
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,
countrysides are precious
one
and we should protect the beauty from people who are careless.
For Example
, Munnar is
one
of the famous
countrysides in
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countrysides, in
kerala
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Kerala
and the visitors keep the
place
untidy and they throw plastic bottle and waste on the roads and mountains.
As a
result tourism
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result, tourism
in the
place
will be declined. The reason behind people argue about the stay in
countryside
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the countryside
is that messy dealings.
This
may decrease the cultivation of agriculture and farm activities
.
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.
Some people build big apartments in the
countryside
may cause some natural
calamilies
.
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.
To Sum Up, building in a
countryside
is an attractive
one but
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one, but
people are careless about their activities.Some people who love
nature
protect environment and they tried
to build eco
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to build an Eco
to build Eco
friendly house that are not harmful to the
nature
.
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.
In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
nature
should be a protected
one
and cities with low space for building new home can give sanction after agree some rule related to the
nature
protection.
Submitted by Liya on

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