Some people say that now we can see films on our own phones and tablets there is no need to go to cinema, others, say to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both the views and give opinion.

Movie theatres are growing like mushrooms in every nook and corner of the world. It is considered by many that movies can be easily viewed on portable devices like tablets, or mobile thereby eliminating the need to travel to the nearest multiplex whereas others believe to be entertained by movies cinema is the best place. I shall discuss both the sides of the argument and state my own perspective. On the
one
hand, it is argued that watching films on handy devices saves cost. People no longer have to purchase tickets and travel to watch their desired movies
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to
play.
This
can turn to be an expensive affair when there are large groups or families together for a show.
Moreover
, it is extremely convenient to view as it does not require following show times and managing work in the fast paced life.
Furthermore
,
one
has the flexibility to watch any season in breaks or
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in
one
go while travelling or at leisure time.
For instance
, mothers with babies prefer watching movies as per their comfortability and schedule.
However
, others argue, that movies are showcased in cinema houses to enjoy it completely since it’s an experience to feel.
This
is to say
one
can be amused by the audio visual effects, intense drama and
cinematography which
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cinematography, which
can only be observed on a big screen. To illustrate, films
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like
Avatar, Bhaubhali and James bond movies have spectacular special effects which are a treat to eyes and people look forward to watch
such
movies in theatres.
Additionally
, it not only provides a break from hectic
lifestyle but
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lifestyle, but
also
gives people an opportunity to relax and watch some classic movies of their favourite actors on screen. To recapitulate, there are convincing arguments on both the sides of the debate
,
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,
viewing movies in theatre entertains and relaxes
,
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,
however
, I think, watching it on mobile phones saves money
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it can viewed as per our own ease as well as flexibility.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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