Some people say that now we can see films on our own phones and tablets there is no need to go to cinema, others, say to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both the views and give opinion.

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Movie theatres are growing like mushrooms in every nook and corner of the world. It is considered by many that movies can be easily viewed on portable devices like tablets, or mobile thereby eliminating the need to travel to the nearest multiplex whereas others believe to be entertained by movies cinema is the best place. I shall discuss both the sides of the argument and state my own perspective. On the

one

hand, it is argued that watching films on handy devices saves cost. People no longer have to purchase tickets and travel to watch their desired movies

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play.

This

can turn to be an expensive affair when there are large groups or families together for a show.

Moreover

, it is extremely convenient to view as it does not require following show times and managing work in the fast paced life.

Furthermore

one

has the flexibility to watch any season in breaks or

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one

go while travelling or at leisure time.

For instance

, mothers with babies prefer watching movies as per their comfortability and schedule.

However

, others argue, that movies are showcased in cinema houses to enjoy it completely since it’s an experience to feel.

This

is to say

one

can be amused by the audio visual effects, intense drama and

cinematography which

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cinematography, which

can only be observed on a big screen. To illustrate, films

likes

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Avatar, Bhaubhali and James bond movies have spectacular special effects which are a treat to eyes and people look forward to watch

such

movies in theatres.

Additionally

, it not only provides a break from hectic

lifestyle but

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lifestyle, but

also

gives people an opportunity to relax and watch some classic movies of their favourite actors on screen. To recapitulate, there are convincing arguments on both the sides of the debate

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viewing movies in theatre entertains and relaxes

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however

, I think, watching it on mobile phones saves money

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

it can viewed as per our own ease as well as flexibility.

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To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

328 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
Preservation
Filmmaking art
Cinematographic nuances

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Some people say that now we can see films on our own phones and tablets there is no need to go to cinema, others, say to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both the views and give opinion.

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