The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

In our contemporary world, an

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of committing crime has become in inherent, especially amid the youngsters. In order to tackle

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problem increasing

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parents'

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roles in their children’s life is seen promising whereas adversaries’ aspect, which is on par with mine, rests on presence of alternative solutions. Perhaps the thing to acknowledge is that parents possess

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a major impact

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generations’ life as a role model,

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. Not only does youngsters implicate to their

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parents, but

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they are the one who

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takes

responsibility for their good manner.

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, offenders stem from

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the negative milieu

a negative milieu

in their family with high contingency which is headed by parents.

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, through

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the eradication

of inclination for crimes and nourishing with efficient techniques about how to bring up children,

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issue may be addressed partly. From other prospective, it is undeniable that the atmosphere that covers the children does not consist of just

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family, but

other external impacts are present as well, that may bewilder or seduce the

youth

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and they must be taken into consideration. To illustrate that, circle of friends that surrounds the

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can be perfect example, if which is abound with crime-inclined people, that would

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an

offender too.

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, friends are by no means the only factor that cajoles the

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to commit

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crime, but

teachers at school, where children spend their hefty proportion of time.

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,

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the remedy

a remedy

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acute situation should cover amendments in terms of parenting

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skills, but

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every single external impact should be faced with elevations in terms of positive manner. The conclusion to be drawn is that, acquiring vital knowledge about up bringing children by parents cannot be panacea. In that case,

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just zero in on parents other aspects should be contemplated equally.