In the past, two decades, crime has been on the rise. To prevent further increase, criminals should be sentenced longer period of prison time. However, some people say there are alternative ways to control cr

Number

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The number

of criminals in Thailand has been

increase

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increasing

significantly compare to the past. People who commit crimes that are locked up in prison sometimes get an excuse for release. It is suggested that longer period of jail-time can decrease crimes while some still think that other punishments should be used. Criminals who commit serious crimes in Thailand

such

as raping, stealing or amusing will be locked up in jail.

However

, if these people pay bail, they will be released or if worst case, they will be offered a less time in jail.

This

causes an unconscious mind to criminals and they might repeat the crime again.

Hence

, some people think that longer period of prison-time can

leads

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lead

to reduce of criminals as it builds conscious in criminal’s consideration which means they will think more carefully before they act.

Nevertheless

, another group of people disagree

to

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with

this

opinion. They suggested that plenty other ways can be

use

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used

to reduce crimes. One

ways

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way

is that, Thai’s government should add stricter law for criminals

such

as not excepting bails and make criminals do

voluntary

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volunteer

works

Accept comma addition

works, for

for example

, treating older people,

this

will make criminal knows how difficult others live and

also

criminals will feel guiltier and thinking that getting away with crimes is not as easy as they think. To conclude, both

longer

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long

time in jail and stricter law are effective in declining crimes in Thailand. Though, in my opinion, government should be more serious with criminal law so that crimes can be

decrease

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decreased

immediately.