Violence in the media promote violent in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agressive
Suggestion
Aggressive
acts,
such
as
,
Accept space
,
terrorist attacks and murder shown on TV channels may stimulate aggression within our communities. I agree with
this
notion to some extent.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the different effects of
this
on people. Many unstable people worldwide are mentally fragile,
therefore
, when they see morbid acts on TV, they are often triggered into mimicking what they see.
This
is because, they may share
similair
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
idealogoes
an advocate of some ideology
ideologues
ideologies
,
however
, are uninspired in terms of the execution of these acts.
For example
, the New Zealand terrorist attacks on Muslim Mosques in 2019, resulted in 4 other attacks on places of worship in Singapore, India, Nigeria and Haiti. Undoubtedly, the media may indirectly encourage violent acts in society when they report atrocious crimes.
However
, one must not disregard the positive effects these crime reports have on people. Alternatively, some view these channels and are enlightened about the dangers that happen around them. In turn, they educate their families and spread awareness abut the negative ramifications of these acts.
For instance
, going back to the example of the New Zealand shootings, people all around the world were united against the violence.
Furthermore
, they took a stand with the
muslim
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
community. In conclusion,
although
the murder and crime portrayed by the media may influence societies negatively, they can
also
englighten
make understand
enlighten
people and unify them.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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