One of your colleagues Recently got a new job at another Company. Write a letter to him and say you feel about him What you enjoy the most while working together Ask what is future plans are

Dear Naseeb I am writing to congratulate you for securing your dream job of a senior technical assistant in Tech Mahindra. Working With you is a lifelong experience. I always felt proud and motivated from you. What inspires me the most is the leadership quality and work life balance you maintain.
Although
, there are numerous good experiences while working together.
However
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latest project
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latest projects
the latest project
undertaken by us as team tops all. How successfully we manage to get project for our company and
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the time
we spent together while pursuing it is unforgettable.
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will Cherished the moments forever when we won
best team award
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the best team award
. Since I know
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you believe in change and growth. So it is unlikely that you remain static
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the same position
for long.
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is very hard to predict your course of action. So do let me know about your future plans. It will be
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a great pleasure
to be helpful in any respect. Please remain corrected. Wishing you great luck for
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the future
. Your sincerely
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