You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music

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I am writing

this

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letter to express my interest

regarding

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the various position available in the sole mate

cachestra

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orchestra

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day I saw an

adverts

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in a local newspaper. My name is Mary and I have completed my bachelors in Music.

Basically

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I am a violinist

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apply

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but

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studied flute

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a Private institution.I have a few years experience in

violine

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violin

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,I enrolled in a small music group which is run by Fr. Alex. who is a priest in St. Francis Church .

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played violin in some reality Shows. After completion of my degree, I would like to improve and learn more about other instruments. I am a gold medalist from

Madurai

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the Madurai

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violin competition. I think these credentials are the plus point in my career. - I would appreciate

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you could consider me

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for

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your orchestra . It will be a create pleasure if you could provide for me. My resume is attached with

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letter and

consider

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me as soon as possible. I am looking forward to

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from you. yours faithfully Mary.

LiyaThu Apr 25 2019

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music

The Greeting

Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why

Some people believe that students should be allowed to evaluate and criticise their teachers to improve the quality of education. Others think this is disrespectful to teachers. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that old buildings should be preserved. Others believe they should be demolished. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that if a child commits a crime, he or she should be punished, while others think it is the child’s parent who should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.