You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Babu. I noticed your advertisement in The Hindu dated 22-04-2019 about the job opening for the position of

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manager in your

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. I would like to apply for that position. I'm currently residing in Chennai with my family. My wife is a housemaker and my son just turned one,

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month. My present company is HCL Technologies India Pvt Limited, managing a 10 member team. Our client Merck & Co, which is one of the top pharmaceutical research industry in

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. My exact role is to allocate the work to my direct

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on daily basis and to mentor them.

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, I am providing internal

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to new joiners in our project.

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will include both

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and organizational practices. My overall experience is 10 years and around 4 years in project and people management. With

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experience, I feel that I'll be more suitable for the position, which you have posted. Thanks

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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, while others think the purposes of museums should be to educate, not entertain. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people belive that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn't be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both the views, give your own opinion and include relevant examples.