You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Babu. I noticed your advertisement in The Hindu dated 22-04-2019 about the job opening for the position of

project

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manager in your

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organization

. I would like to apply for that position. I'm currently residing in Chennai with my family. My wife is a housemaker and my son just turned one,

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month. My present company is HCL Technologies India Pvt Limited, managing a 10 member team. Our client Merck & Co, which is one of the top pharmaceutical research industry in

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. My exact role is to allocate the work to my direct

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on daily basis and to mentor them.

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, I am providing internal

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to new joiners in our project.

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will include both

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and organizational practices. My overall experience is 10 years and around 4 years in project and people management. With

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experience, I feel that I'll be more suitable for the position, which you have posted. Thanks

e.babuganesh

Apr 25, 2019

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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159 words

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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people think that technological developments have positively affected the way we live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities