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School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #teachers #development #students #parents
Personality development
such
 as social or intelligence among children's should be enhanced from their childhood.
however
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However
, few people believe that educators should take complete responsibility rather than parents for developing their skills.
this
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This
 essay disagrees with the statement because parents play a major
role
 in a child's life and
moreover
 most of the time, kids are well connected with their parents.
First
 and foremost, let us consider why
parents
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the parents' role
parents' role
parent's role
role
 is more important than the teacher.
that
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That
 is mainly because in a typical day children are spending hardly 8 hours in school with their teachers, but remaining hours are spent with their parents, so they should take utmost care to teach the offsprings about the social benefits and how to face any situation in an intellectual manner. To cite an example, a recent survey on children has revealed that most of the students who are the leading fruitful life are the individuals who were nurtured basic manners
from
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of
 their younger age.
Nevertheless
,
although
 the management takes steps to incorporate or educate children about a
social well
Accept comma addition
social, well
 being, parents are really crucial to make a stronger Foundation because, mostly, children try to imbibe their parents and they consider them as their
role
 models.
For instance
, In a recent interview, a successful Businessman revealed the secret of his success stating that his
father
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father's
fathers
 footsteps were the reason which eventually led him to become a famous personality. To conclude, in order to make a child lives more prosperous both educator's, as well as parents, should play a pivotal
role
 in which, parents have a bit higher priority in
molding
the act of creating something by casting it in a mold
moulding
 their kids since, they are there real heroes and actual mentors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuances
  • responsibility
  • intellectual development
  • social development
  • structured learning environment
  • curriculum
  • diverse interactions
  • group activities
  • conflict resolution
  • foundational impact
  • core values
  • beliefs
  • attitudes
  • nurturing
  • joint responsibility
  • collaboration
  • continuous dialogue
  • distinct roles
  • underestimate
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