Nowadays ,young people know less about traditions & culture than in the past. what are the reasons for it. Is this a Positive on a negative development

Tradition
and
culture
are the
viral
urgently needed; absolutely necessary
vital
part of people’s life.
Moreover
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Moreover, tradition
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Moreover traditional traditional
tradition
culture
are related
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is related
to each other. In the past
,
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,
life of each
people
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person
were
depend
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depended
depending
upon their
culture
, and
tradition
. Nowadays, young people lack the
knowledge
about their country's
culture
and
tradition
.
This
essay will discuss the reason about these
change
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changes
and consider is it a positive or negative development.
Oves
recent years, there has been an innumerous change in the behaviour of people due to improved economic condition.
In
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With
the fastest growing
economy people
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economy, people
are very busy with their studies and
job
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jobs
. They have no enough time to spend
for
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in
traditional activities.
Moreover
, people try to imitate the life of other Foreigners
.
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.
Another important point is that, most of the people are addicted in different media especially movies. They follow the lifestyle of their favourite Stars.
Furthermore in
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Furthermore, in
the competitive world Parents have no busy with their work and they
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try to teach traditional and cultural values to their children.
On the other hand
, there are
nemamous
measures that we should take in order to attain a minimal traditional and cultural
knowledge
.
Firstly
Schools and colleges must provide a class for getting a basic
knowledge
about our
tradition
and
culture
.
Moreover some
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Moreover, some
social service groups can conduct
Campaign
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a campaign
a Campaign
for giving information
In addition
to that
,
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,
we can conduct some competition or cultural Program relating to our
tradition
. These activities entertain young Generation and through
this
they can absorb information regarding our
tradition
and
culture
. To conclude that
,
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,
in my
opinion lack
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opinion, lack
of
knowledge
about our
tradition
and
culture
are
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is
negative development
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a negative development
. In order to tackle the Situation the youngsters themselves change their mind towards our country's
tradition
and
culture
. Though
this
we can recover our countries proud through our youth.
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