Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or The Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

It is common that travelling to another city or country at least once a year.
Therefore
, scores of people seek for
new
Suggestion
a new place
place
to take a trip. Some places are not only
fresh but
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fresh, but
also
dangerous,
such
as
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as, for
for instance
, Sahara Desert or Antarctic. It is better to investigate on the advantages and disadvantages to travel to those sites. As a colossal of people feel bored about their tedious life and going to a
place
that is
too famous and almost everybody near you went
their
in or at that place
there
before
don’t
decrease the feelings. So, they
pursuit
Suggestion
pursue
a new lifestyle for a while. For their sake, they
don’t
mind it includes little dangerous. If it is a dangerous location, they will feel more self-satisfied. Maybe the more challenge it is, the more excited they are. I remembered several years ago; I and my family went to a
place
which not a lot people knew it. When we arrived there, there
was
Suggestion
were
no convenient stores in the small village. My father was proud to tell us that only traveller who were really good at finding a natural
place
can find that village. Even we just arrived, but he loved the
place
immediately
(
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(
quickly).
Therefore
, those less popular places can offer a different feeling than other places. Even the experience is
funny
Suggestion
fun
and interesting, the bad memories never recede. I remembered at that night, when we went to sleep, the pillow covers were one black side and one white side. They only showed you the white side. The blanket was not that clean too. That’s the downside when you travel to a
place
usually not a lot of people come. The
live
Suggestion
living
conditions might be really bad when you decide to try those places It is better to know the exhaustive information about the challenging
place
before you go.
Moreover
, after
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
back, showing friends the picture and seeing their shocking face is interesting too. So, I
don’t
regret
to go
Suggestion
going
there, but I
don’t
want to go again.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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