There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperature higher. What might Be the man made causes of temperature Rising? How should we deal with this problem.

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The problem of global warming is becoming a matter of great concern for nations because of the increased Human intervention in nature,
overtime
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over time
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There are various reasons behind
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the rise
of global
temperature
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some of them are discussed in ensuring paragraphs with their remedial actions. The main reason behind elevation of
earth
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temperature
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is deforestation. To accommodate large population trees are to be cut down.
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, the level of natural gases
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as Oxygen and Carbon dioxide in
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the environment
is imbalanced
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With increased carbon dioxide, which is period has been gas responsible for global warming the
earth
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is getting hotter
gradually
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graded
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, industrialisation is another factor leading to global warming. Enhanced economic activities over time result in
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the construction
of many manufacturing industries. Various processes involved in manufacturing results in generation of harmful gases.
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use of chlorofluorocarbons in refrigerator production releases harmful carbon contents in environment depleting protective Ozone Layer around
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Earth
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the Earth
causing harmful sun rays entering
Earth
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's atmosphere.
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, leading to rise in words
temperature
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scale. To eliminate Global Warming afforestation is
most convenient method
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the most convenient method
. Planting trees is what should be done to neutralize the dire effect of carbon dioxide emissions.
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,
preventing
earth
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's
temperature
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from Rising.
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to
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, government should regularise industrial processes and promote
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the use
of conventional sources of
energy
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such
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as wind and water
energy
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instand
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of thermal
energy
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. Pollutants generated from incomplete combustion of coal in
manufacturing sector
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the manufacturing sector
will be suppressed by using clean sources
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. To Summarise,
problem
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the problem
of increased
temperature
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of planet
earth
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can be controlled by encouraging people to grow more trees, with great restrictions put by government on industrial air pollution and promoting cleaner source of
energy
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rather than traditional global warming can be regulated easily.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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