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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

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Owing to the convenient transport and advanced communication technology, people’s habitat
is not fix
Suggestion
does not fix
doesn't fix
is not fixed
has not fixed
 and they are able to live in the place where they prefer.
Although
 a large population in one area is likely to lead to the huge consumption of the local natural
resource
, people will
also
 gain superior living quality what they
can not
can not
cannot
 achieve in other places. On one hand,
a mount
a quantity of money
amount
 of residents living in the same city can result in
a
Suggestion
an
 extremely quick speed of consuming
resource
. Human beings
not only have
Suggestion
don't only have
 to drink water and breath fresh air for surviving, but
also
 need to extend the area of
city
Suggestion
the city
 which means to turn forests or farmlands into communities or factories for living or working. As an example, the population in the capital of China is 20 million, and there
are
Suggestion
is
 rarely farmland surround.
This
 is the main demerits of staying anywhere by individuals’ preference because of the high rate of the consumption.
On the other hand
, the greatest benefit of living in the
dreamful
causing fear or dread or terror
dreadful
 region
usually stem
Suggestion
usually stems
 from the brilliant
life
 in that area. The lifestyles in different regions are always different and folks absolutely are more enjoyable to follow the lifestyle what are suitable for them.
For instance
, employees in India have to overwork since it is the only way to earn enough money to feed families, whereas most Canadians can get the reasonable income even if they just work 8 hours per weekday. Escaping from the
circumstance what
Accept comma addition
circumstance, what
 people hate and settling in the great one is intensely vital to improve general populations’
life
 quality. I would
therefor
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
 argue that
although
 there are cons of choosing
living place
Suggestion
a living place
 by individual’s preference,
such
 as the damage of the local
resource
, they are outweighed by the pros since the city with huge population can be supplied
resource
 by other places. Living and working in the
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 place is an effective way to choose a satisfied
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 and to be easier to attain a superior
life
 what people can not achieve in other places.
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