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Nowadays many adults have full time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore their other. What are cause and effects?

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Whilst, some men and women do full
time
 placement and
segment
Suggestion
segments
a segment
 of their lives exhaust on is completely elevate while some grow up are under high tension and ignore
disdain other part
Suggestion
the disdain other part
disdain other parts
 of
life
. I would discuss both views in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are myriad origin and outcome why I claim that the individuals are under high pressure. The
first
 and an important reason, some mankind do long
time
work
 for their basic needs
;
Accept space
;
 these days everything is expensive.
such
Suggestion
Such
 as grocery, education and other objects. To buy these things is necessary. They give overtime to their
work
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 they forget
other part
Suggestion
other parts
the other part
 of
life
.
Moreover
, some people want to live luxury
Lifestyle
Suggestion
Life style
.
Thus they
Accept comma addition
Thus, they
 spend
hour
Suggestion
an hour
hours
 and hour on
work
 place.
Furthermore
, if human being doing job for
long
Suggestion
a long time
time
 daily
then
 it would be harmful for their health;
also
 they will under strain. Which would be adverse for
body
Suggestion
the body
.
In addition
, more
time
 spent on
work
 is decent for
experience
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experience, however
however
 it
also
 uncooperative for mentally tensity. It is important for every person to live their
life
 with enjoyment and happiness. It
reduce
Suggestion
reduces
work
 tension and
also
 fresh mind do
better job
Suggestion
a better job
.
Thus
, profession
time
 should be limited so that everyone can live
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 moment of
life
.
Similarly
, they
can not
can not
cannot
 give their
time
 to family and children due to hectic schedule
then
 some are relationships break. So it is as well as mentally disturb human mind. In the conclusion, for masses what is necessary,
however
 job
time
 should be limited
.
Accept space
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 that everyone
will be enjoy
Suggestion
will be enjoyed
 other part of
live
Suggestion
life
.
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