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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Entertainment has become an important part of our daily
lives
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life
.
However
, many thinkers believe that people in
entertainment industry
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the entertainment industry
 are given a hefty sum of money, to which I have dissenting views. On one hand, it is quite justified to pay a reasonable amount of money
to
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for
 the sports personals or to film stars for their showcase of talent to entertain the common people. Albeit, they do not posses any mental
ability but
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ability, but
 they practice day and night to polish these skills in order to amuse people or even to represent the nation at world level,
thus
, making an immense contribution to the society. To illustrate, the cricket team of a country, practice for an extended
time so
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time, so
 as to make one’s country proud by winning a world cup.
Therefore
, it is important to pay a quality amount of money to these celebrities.
On the other hand
, some other professionals
such
 as biologists must me highly paid as due to their hard work, the cure to various deadly diseases can be found.
Moreover
, it is common that some life risking jobs
such
 as job of
fire fighters
a member of a fire department who tries to extinguish fires
firefighters
 are still underrated and in my opinion need to be sufficiently paid as they save lives of the people.
In addition
 to
this
, others related to
noble line
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the noble line
a noble line
 of work like teachers and doctors should be paid in abundance as they contribute crucially to the development and well being of the nation. To conclude, there must be a dignity of labour and the occupations must not be ranked as high or low as every professional impart their skill and knowledge for the holistic development of a realm.
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