Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education has become
crucial part
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a crucial part
in a child’s life. Many people believe that the education must be imparted in separate
schools while
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schools, while
others are of dissenting views and think that the learners must be encouraged to attend coeducation schools. Both these views are discussed in forthcoming paragraphs. On one hand, same
sex
schools have many positive points.
Firstly
, same gender institutions
helps
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help
to communicate and share things freely, to which some children hesitate while studying in mixed schools.
Secondly
, these schools make children more disciplined by decreasing the rate of indulgence in any teenage fascination and sexual activities in the school premises.
Last
but not the least, there is minimal chance of cases of
sex
related discrimination as the boys are being preferred over girls in the integrated schools.
On the other hand
, talking about mixed schools, there are many advantages to study at these centres of learning. The foremost being is the chance of better interaction with the opposite gender; inculcating the qualities
such
as understanding and
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
, which will prove to be helpful in later part of their
lives
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life
.
Moreover
, it will help to be respectful for the opposite
sex
as it is really necessary for a healthy society.
For instance
, a study has shown that the students of co-ed schools are more likely to be respectful to the other gender as compared to the same
sex
schools. Beside
this
, there will be an environment of friendly completion among both girls and boys which will help in their holistic development. To conclude, both these
style
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styles
of giving educations have their own pros and cons.
However
, in my opinion, the pros of mixed schools outweighs the same
sex
school,
thus
, must be preferred.

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