Task one The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

Task one

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The following report analyzed causes to learn in regard to
Adult's
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adults'
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opinions and how they suggest that the cost of learning should be distributed. In order to attain that objective, I depend on the presented pie charts and Bar
chart
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charts
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. The Bar chart depicts that most of
students
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the students
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around 40%, learn as they are trigged in subjects.
While
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,
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it shows that students rarely learn to meet people around 9%.
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, it found that there are seven reasons for education based on the conducted survey which are as follows in terms of its significance in Ascending order : interest in subjects,
gain
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qualifications, helpful for
current
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the current
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job, promotion ,
enjoy
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learning, to be able to change jobs, and to meet people.
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, the pie charts described that people suggested that
cost
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the cost
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of education should be more transferred to
individual's
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an individual's
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burden by 40% more than taxpayer and employer.
To sum up
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, the given charts showed by far reasons for learning and how cost should be distributed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • stakeholders
  • pursue further education
  • financial contribution
  • survey results
  • policy implications
  • correlation
  • adult education
  • distribution of costs
  • significant differences
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