Task one The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The following report analyzed causes to learn in regard to
Adult's
opinions and how they suggest that the cost of learning should be distributed. In order to attain that objective, I depend on the presented pie charts and Bar Fix the agreement mistake
adults'
chart
.
The Bar chart depicts that most of Fix the agreement mistake
charts
students
around 40%, learn as they are trigged in subjects. Add an article
the students
While
,
it shows that students rarely learn to meet people around 9%. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, it found that there are seven reasons for education based on the conducted survey which are as follows in terms of its significance in Ascending order : interest in subjects, gain
qualifications, helpful for Wrong verb form
gaining
current
job, promotion , Add an article
the current
a current
enjoy
learning, to be able to change jobs, and to meet people.
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enjoying
Moreover
, the pie charts described that people suggested that cost
of education should be more transferred to Correct article usage
the cost
individual's
burden by 40% more than taxpayer and employer.
Correct article usage
an individual's
To sum up
, the given charts showed by far reasons for learning and how cost should be distributed.Submitted by yasminewafa23 on
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