Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to in suburbs or countryside rather cities To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #traffic #transportation #suburbs #countryside #cities

Nowadays, traffic congestions and gridlocks are prevalent in the urban areas and

this

has resulted to urban to rural area migrations. Certain individuals opine that to mitigate traffic and

transportation

issues, people should be persuaded to live either in rural districts or

outskirts

Suggestion

the outskirts

of town rather than living in cities. In

this

essay I totally agree with the aforementioned. Undoubtedly, living in urban area is associated with a plethora of

struggles

Accept comma addition

struggles, however

however

, individuals should be encouraged to live in the conurbations or rural areas because of the following reasons.

Firstly

, low

transportation

fares. Cost of

transportation

in rural and suburbs

are

Suggestion

pocket-friendly because of easily accessible road networks.

For instance

, in

villages

Suggestion

the villages

one could easily transport oneself's to and fro market square to his or her abode without spending huge amount of money. In general,

transportation

in villages or at commuter belts

are

Suggestion

pocket friendly and easily accessible.

Secondly

, less

air

pollution

In other words

, urban districts due to increased number of vehicles plying the roads, there is a rise in the emission of carbon monoxide.

This

emission causes

air

pollution

and

also

depletes the ozone layer

there by

by that means or because of that

thereby

causing global warming. A recent research

Suggestion

from

the USA has shown that

air

pollution

in Japanese cities

are

Suggestion

70% greater than her suburbs and villages. On the whole, rural or outskirts of town have low traffic and less

transportation

problem due to lower number of

vehicle

Suggestion

vehicles

plying the roads. To recapitulate

Accept space

rural areas and suburbs have less

transportation

problems

Accept space

traffics and

grid locks

a traffic jam so bad that no movement is possible

gridlocks

when compared to urban areas. I

retierate

to say, state, or perform again

reiterate

my stand that to solve these issues that individuals should be encouraged to stay in rural districts or near cities because of

air

pollution

and low

transportation

fares.

Submitted by akinade053 on Mon Apr 29 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

289 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a well-known law in a lot of countries that when young men reach a certain age, it is mandatory to join the military service after they finish school. The law also applies to young women in some countries. Personally, I think it is a good thing for the young generation to join military service and the countries should adopt the system as the younger generation will learn good life lessons while doing service.
6
band
It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this generation, parents are frequently debating about their children. Especially, they feel hard, when they ask their children to read books. From my perspective, I totally agree with the statement. The main reason why children are not willing books is that a huge number of words are printed on every page of the book. Instead of conveying the message of books in words, we can try to transfer the knowledge in other ways. So, I will discuss the issue of why the kids are finding it hard to book, and what the ways to improve their reading skills.
6
band
Some people think all university student should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The field of study is one of the most important choices that institute students have to make in terms of progressing in their lives and future careers. Some argue that a field of study takes priority over students’ preferences, so obliging students to study such subject area brings prosperity for individuals and nations in the future. The importance of both will be discussed and I will mention my personal viewpoint at the end.
5
band
Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, technology fills almost every aspect of our life. It makes our life convenient and effective. While I agree scientific research is very important, I do not agree it should be controlled by the government instead of private companies.
6
band
Some people argue that modern technologies such as computers and cellphones destroy people’ social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this era, no one can deny that the usage of technology is constantly on the rise.However, some arguments are rising among public about how the usage of technology such as computers and cell phones can impact social interaction.In this paragraph, I disagree and would like to shed light on the reason for this change.

Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to in suburbs or countryside rather cities To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think all university student should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people argue that modern technologies such as computers and cellphones destroy people’ social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?