As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree..

Computer
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The computer
is fast becoming an indispensable teaching tool in the
education
sector. The burgeoning demand to cut
class
time and increase efficiency in learning has encouraged the use of computers. It seemed rational to envisage the total overhaul of teachers in the
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
for computers someday.
This
argument in my candid opinion will not be able to hold water because of the intricacies of certain engaging course subject and a whole lot of distractions posed by the internet. The introduction of computer-based-
education
system marked a moment of epiphany in
this
sector.There were advancements in online classes, exams and even certifications via computer.
This
approach
did not only reduced
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has not only reduced
cost of attending lectures
physically but
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physically, but
it
also
saved time and stress encountered in an on-campus classes.
This
trend craved for one fervid question; 'Why not computerize the whole
education
system?.
On the contrary
, the computer based model is only limited to
few courses
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a few courses
like public health, business administration and few others, where its successes were renowned while other courses like health sciences, engineering and agricultural sciences are more inclined to a
practicals
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
based
education
system. These sciences deal mainly on practical issues with the supervisors
in
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on
hand to perfect the skills student learns. Practices actually makes perfect. Delicate subjects like incision in surgery cannot be possibly taught online or learnt via
youtube
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YouTube
without a practical handler insight to tutor medical students.
Therefore
, a face to face contact must be ensured there for efficient transmission of
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
from the teacher to students.
This
practical
approach
will serve as the major downturn to the complete installation of computers as
teacher
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a teacher
in the near future.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, the internet is widely known as a recreational apparatus and it is rigged with junks that serve as a source of distraction to students. Social media sites like
facebook
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Facebook
and
twitter
a series of chirps
Twitter
are currently the most visited sites in the world, with
larger chunk
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a larger chunk
larger chunks
of the visitors young people of school age. It is rather inevitable to neglect
this
fact as
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fact, as
research in recent year have shown online
graduates ranking
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graduates, ranking
low in the list of candidates with employable skills. Considering
this
factor, efforts were made to encourage students to attend classes on campus rather than online. To recapitulate, computer based form of
education
presents a
class
act
approach
to the transmission of
knwoledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
but will not be able to completely phase out teaching in
class
because of the more pragmatic
approach
of teaching some technical courses and
also
plethora forms of distractions that accompany online learning.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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