In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Whet are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Recently, there has been a significant change in both family
structure
and roles.
This
essay considers
such
transformation as a retrogressive type and
also
examines the different changes occurring. There are various types of reorganization that are common to various families these days.
First
to consider is a recent practice whereby the wive is recognized as the head of the family. In
such
settings, it the wife who pays the
brideprice
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bride price
of the
husband
and contribute more financially to the marital rites.The Idoma tribe of Edo state is a good example in
this
case as the wife is the one who goes to work while the
husband
stays at home to take care of household chores. Another common instance, is to have women playing the roles of the man nowadays. The female gender is usually considered limited in roles in many
settings but
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settings, but
this
is no longer the case. In
this
present dispensation, wives
do not
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do, not
only do the same type of jobs like their
husband
, but
also
work
same number
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the same number
of hours like them.
This
pattern of organization has been rated
predominant
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predominantly
in many big cities around the world from demographic information on the United nations website. In my own view, I consider
this changes
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these changes
in both
structure
and told in an unpleasant light. As a matter of fact, the consequences are both disgusting and unappealing. When wives are culturally empowered to be recognized as the head of the family, it depresses the ego of the man and makes him feel unhappy.
This
situation can increase the risk of
such
a man for health problems
such
as depression. A good number of men are not able to tolerate
been
the state or fact of existing
being
directed by their wives at home,
this
makes them an object of ridicule among their mates who sees them as weak and friable. According to a recent publication on family health available online
,
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,
the rate of depression among
such
men is almost triple that of families where there is no change in
structure
.Another point to consider, is the neglect suffered by the children when the mother is the one working to provide money for the family.
Such
children are not properly catered for and are prone to various degrees of abuses. Children from these
type
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types
of homes are more likely to be influenced by their peers. They submit to peer
pressures
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pressure
and participate in various vices due to poor supervision and parentage. In conclusion, the recent changes in
role
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the role
roles
and
structure
in families have brought about disheartening consequences
such
as psychological trauma and poor parentage and
this
has been explored in
this
piece. It is
imperative
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imperative, therefore
therefore
for families to maintain the old practice of having the
husband
as the head of the home and the one who provides for the need of the family.

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