Some people think that residents should be responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is a government responsibility. Discuss and state your own opinion.

• There is increasing awareness in the cleanness and tidiness of an
area
,
however
, some individuals believe
that is
the responsibility of residents to keep their environment clean and tidy, while others think it is the responsibility of the
government
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion. On the one hand, the
area
individuals reside needs to be kept clean and tidy by the people to enable them to live healthily, free of disease. It is common saying cleanliness is
next
to godliness.
Also
, people need to arrange and sort their waste properly, so as to avoid a domestic accident with an untidy environment.
For example
, children having injuries on their legs or hands where dangerous household utensils like knives are not properly kept away from them.
Furthermore
, it is the responsibility of citizens to maintain their immediate
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
, like using
cutlass
Suggestion
a cutlass
to cut
tthe
definite article
the
grass, when it is overgrown
such
, will reduced reptiles and rodents in the
area
thereby making the environment clean and tidy.
On the other hand
, the
government
plays a major role in the cleanness and tidiness of the
area
where citizens reside.
Firstly
, the
government
needs to hire the services of a waste management company, they will help to transfer waste generated at homes for proper disposer.
Although
this
also
helps to generate incomes for
government
, which they can use
to
Suggestion
for
fixed street light and maintain those areas.
For instance
, the
lagos
chief port and economic center of Nigeria; located in southwestern Nigeria on the Gulf of Guinea; former capital of Nigeria
Lagos
largest
lagos'
state
government
has the services of LAWMAN, which has
help
Suggestion
helped
to clean
lagos
a company emblem or device
logos
legs
logs
. In conclusion, I think individuals and
government
both have important roles to maintain clean and tidy areas where citizens reside.
This
help
Suggestion
helps
to provide healthy people and
also
a source of revenue for the
government
.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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