Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit, others say it is not good to expliot them. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Over the
last
decade, concerns.
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Er
= have been raised about how animals are exploited for human benefits.
This
has become a controversial topic. Some people think that feeding on animals are beneficial to man's diet and
therefore
necessary for consumption. Others believe that it is inhumane to use animals for experimental purposes and should be stopped immediately. In my opinion, exploitation of animals for fun or hunting games should be banned. Humans need to eat, and animals are essential part of the meals we consume. Studies have shown that there are many nutrients and minerals that can
gotten
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get
from animals. Animals are the only natural source for these nutrients like animal protein. Omega 3
for instance
is important to
man
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
.
it
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It
is a fatty acid with many health benefits and it can only be obtained from fish.
This
cannot be made possible if we do not take advantage of
this
nature’s gift.
On the contrary
, some people think these nutrients can be manufactured artificially and it is not compulsory to get
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
resources naturally. They believe that anyone who indulge in the act of killing animals for any purpose is inhuman. And that these animals have
life
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a life
that should not be ended abruptly.
Furthermore
, they are living things that go through pain when they have
face
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faced
the wrath mankind for unnecessary reasons. Some of man’s activities should be banned immediately. These actions involve killing of animals for amusement or for playing games.
For example
, people hunt animals as a competition and
this
is enjoyable to them. They derive
pleasure carrying out
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pleasure in carrying out
this
act and
this
should be stopped. And I think the government can develop policies to curb these actions. Animals should only be exploited only when necessary. In the laboratory, where human subject cannot be used to test experimental drugs, animals become the alternative.
Therefore
, should humans cancel all
such
experiments? No.
This
is because these works are important to our survival and we are left with no choice than to use them. Summarily,
although
exploiting animals
is
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are
debateable
open to doubt or debate
debatable
, and some think that due to its merits it should be
encourage
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encouraged
.
However
, others oppose it. In some cases, it is inevitable to do without using animals
this
could be for research or food purposes and
therefore
it should be exploited only when there are no other options.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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