Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If there are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

English is a universal

language

that every individual strives to learn. In recent years, studying English at various institutions is often perceived to be more important than studying traditional

languages

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languages, however

however

such

languages are not taught, many are at the risk of fading out.

This

essay will discuss why I am of the opinion that everyone should learn English, as well as, traditional languages and how

this

languages

Suggestion

language

can be preserved.

Firstly

, English is a universal

language

with tremendous benefits

such

as efficient communication as well as fostering global trade, and

thus

every

individual regardless

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individual, regardless

of age, gender or race should learn

this

language

. There is no where in the

world one

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world, one

would go that wouldn’t find at least one native English speaker. Take

for instance

, a month ago, I

traveled

traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term

travelled

to Paris where their

first

language

is French. I generally would have been lost except for the simple fact that most individuals regardless of being French natives have learnt the universal

language

‘English’.

This

simple fact emphasizes the need to learn English.

However

, while I agree that

English

Suggestion

the English language

language

should be taught, I

also

believe that we should try to ensure the survival of traditional languages because

this

would preserve our culture and prolong our heritage. One of the many ways

this

can be done is by public awareness. Publicly educating the younger generation. Take

for example

, the ‘save the

language

’ campaign that aired for approximately 8 months in the early ‘90s. The show brought light to our cultural beliefs and ways.

In addition

this

will keep alive the heroes of our past. In conclusion, learning traditional languages in institutions should be as important as learning

English

Suggestion

the English language

language

this

would not only aid in

our communication but

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our communication, but

also

provide a sense of community.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

296 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

global communication
economic opportunities
cultural diversity
endangered
linguistic heritage
inclusive
multilingualism
language revitalization
language policy
language preservation

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If there are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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