Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If there are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

English is a universal
language
that every individual strives to learn. In recent years, studying English at various institutions is often perceived to be more important than studying traditional
languages
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languages, however
however
if
such
languages are not taught, many are at the risk of fading out.
This
essay will discuss why I am of the opinion that everyone should learn English, as well as, traditional languages and how
this
languages
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language
can be preserved.
Firstly
, English is a universal
language
with tremendous benefits
such
as efficient communication as well as fostering global trade, and
thus
every
individual regardless
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individual, regardless
of age, gender or race should learn
this
language
. There is no where in the
world one
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world, one
would go that wouldn’t find at least one native English speaker. Take
for instance
, a month ago, I
traveled
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
to Paris where their
first
language
is French. I generally would have been lost except for the simple fact that most individuals regardless of being French natives have learnt the universal
language
‘English’.
This
simple fact emphasizes the need to learn English.
However
, while I agree that
English
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the English language
language
should be taught, I
also
believe that we should try to ensure the survival of traditional languages because
this
would preserve our culture and prolong our heritage. One of the many ways
this
can be done is by public awareness. Publicly educating the younger generation. Take
for example
, the ‘save the
language
’ campaign that aired for approximately 8 months in the early ‘90s. The show brought light to our cultural beliefs and ways.
In addition
,
this
will keep alive the heroes of our past. In conclusion, learning traditional languages in institutions should be as important as learning
English
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the English language
language
as
this
would not only aid in
our communication but
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our communication, but
also
provide a sense of community.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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