Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Despite the negative attitude displayed towards
life
's issues, others show a more positive side and try to improve any bad situation.
This
school of thought is
up held
keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last
upheld
by optimists and
otfen
many times at short intervals
often
times is backed up with the saying of "if
life
gives you lemons, make lemonade out of it". A vivid example of
this
stance, is the musician
Kennedy who
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Kennedy, who
despite having sight disabilities, has proven to be one of the world's greatest songwriters' in history not allowing any setbacks in
life
. I agree completely with
this
view and am of the opinion that irrespective of the challenges faced, it is more deserving to try
improving
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to improve
situations.
Life
in itself is dynamic and will always provide better opportunities when people continue to strive, refuse to give up and most importantly, never give up. The story of a 22 year old who refused
working
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to work
as a food
vendor but
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vendor, but
instead
availed himself for
further
trainings on ideas and strategies on establishing a food company and has presently become a brand-name nation wide remains a personal motivation to me. In conclusion, it is evident to say that maintaining a positive mindset in the midst of difficulty is key to achieving success in
life
.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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