Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Superficially,

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can be

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perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

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as an insignificant

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accessories

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living if we compare it to other primary human needs

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as

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the act of removing or getting rid of something

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and shelter. For

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reason, some people see the government effort

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contribute to the progress or growth of

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the arts as a misuse of money which could be better invested in other sectors.

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essay is going to clarify the role of the arts

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our society and explain why they deserve to be funded. Generally speaking,

Art

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is about creation and contemplation of beauty. Human beings either create or

btain

come into possession of

obtain

a work of

art

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not only to

decrate

make more attractive by adding ornament, colour, etc.

decorate

their spaces but

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to obtain some

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getting two things to correspond

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balance

their lives. Can you imagine the World, with all its conflicts and wars, without any piece of

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surrounding it? Certainly, life would be a tragedy in the absence of beauty to compensate all crudeness we

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have been exposed

have been exposing

to.

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, The arts play a significant role in

countries' economy

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the countries' economy

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Nations which

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Nations, which

are abundant in

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works receives millions of tourists every

year thank

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year, thank

to their museums and

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an architectural product or work

architecture

.

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, Paris, where we can find The Louvre, several famous ancient buildings and landmarks, is the most

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visited by throngs of tourists

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city in the World. People come from everywhere across the Planet, spending their money in

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city simply to see

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. In

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a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

,

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it is

it's

clear that the arts are an asset in society. Humans need the beauty of

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to strive emotionally and economically. For

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reason, Governments which are

responsable

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable

responsible

for looking after their

citizens

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citizens'

interests, must subsidise the arts so as to make them

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to everybody.