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Inspite of the advances in agriculture, many people still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about it?

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Agriculture
 is the a very important source of
food
 globally and for
this
 reason, lots of investment and advances have been made in
this
 sector. Despite
this
,
hunger
 is still a problem among many people.
This
 essay will examine why
this
 is so and possible solutions to
this
 problem. To start, famine is still a matter of global concern today more so in underdeveloped African countries and Asia. The list of causes of
hunger
 in these nations
is
Suggestion
are
 endless. Civil
war
 to start with, is at the top of the list. Countries currently in civil
war
 crisis experience unbearable famine.
This
 is because agricultural activities are scuttled in
war
 situations and few
agric
Suggestion
Agric
 produce destroyed by grenades and bombs. Yemen
for
instance suffers
Accept comma addition
instance, suffers
 a great deal of
hunger
 due to
war crisis
Suggestion
the war crisis
 ongoing for years there. Other causes of
hunger
 among nations of the world are corrupt government misappropriating funds for agricultural loans. Global warming and
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
 gases negatively affecting farm produce. Lazy youths avoiding outdoor farming no matter how advanced and mechanised it is.
Not withstanding
Suggestion
Notwithstanding
, these causes and problems are not without solutions. Global warming as a challenge mitigating against advances in
agriculture
 and
food
 production is far reaching.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 should make policies and device strategies that
will will cut
Suggestion
will cut
 down on activities that worsen global warming.
For example
, reduction of fossil fuel use, alternative fuel and energy sources, measures against deforestation and desertification will enhance yield of agricultural produce. The result is more
food
 and less
hunger
.
In
addition until
Accept comma addition
addition, until
 peace is restored in warring nations, the populace would not benefit from the developments in
Agriculture
. Corruption should be fought seriously for citizens to benefit from international funds on
agriculture
 and
food
 production. In conclusion,
this
 essay has examined the causes of
hunger
 amidst global efforts and investment in
agriculture
, as well as the possible way out. Advances in
agriculture
 will continue to be futile if these solutions are not implemented.
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