The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solution s can you suggest.

In most countries, especially the developing and the underdeveloped ones, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer
thus
,
Accept space
,
increasing the gap between them.
Although
there are so many problems associated with
this
, there are
also
ways to solve them. One important problem that could arise from the increased gap between the rich and the poor is unequal
accessibility
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access
to tertiary
education
.
For example
, in Nigeria where tuition is very high for university
education
, only the wealthy ones could access
this
level of
education
thereby leaving the
unwealthy
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
persons behind.
Also
, there is reduced marriage between the two extremes as the richer parents would not accept their children's marriage to commoners.
This
is
also
very obtainable in Nigeria where there is a notion
by
Suggestion
of
the upper class that
such
marriage could tarnish their
images
Suggestion
image
.
Lastly
, most commoners found it difficult to air their views in the society because they feel that the wealthier ones attract more audience even when their opinions are wrong. The
first
solution to these problems is for the government to enhance free
education
, especially at the tertiary level so that all citizens would feel equal.
This
helps to ensure that people from inferior background still have right to universal
education
.
Secondly
, massive employment if enhanced would go a long way in providing solutions to
this
, and employment should be based on merit following interviews
instead
of through connections. By so doing there would be less space between the
buoyants
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points
and the non
buoyants
railroad track having two movable rails and necessary connections; used to turn a train from one track to another or to store rolling stock
points
.
Finally
, government offices should be restructured
such
that less monetary value is attached to any political position thereby making the seats available for all. In conclusion, despite the defaults associated with increasing space between the luxurious and non luxurious individuals, there are
also
many possible and rewarding solutions.
Submitted by Esther on

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