Many people believe that reducing speed limits is the best option for road safety improvement .do you think there are other measures that could be put in place? what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

One of the most trends of today's world is how to improve the
safety
of the roads and decrease the number of accidents.
Alot
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A lot
of people believe that in decreasing the speed limit is the best way to develop the road
safety
.In my opinion, there are many measures can do beside reducing the speed.
Firstly
, expand the streets in proportion with increasing the number of
population so
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the population, so
the population so
the vehicles can
moving
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move
smoothly and the
safety
distance became more to
avoide
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
Ovid
evade
collisions
.
Accept space
.
In addition
, trying to change the way of life
;
Accept space
;
for example
, use the
bublic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transportation
instead
of driving.
Seconly
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Secondly
,
biult
introduces something in contrast or unexpected
but
built
beat
the
serviece
work done by one person or group that benefits another
service
surface
roads beside the central streets
reduse
cut down on; make a reduction in
reduce
traffic jam which is
cause
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caused
by presence of shops and fuel stations on the side of the main street. The pros of reducing the speed limit
is conserve
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are conserving
people
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peoples'
peoples
lives
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
many
reserches
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
have approved that the hike
og
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
speed is the
first
reason of
accidants
an unfortunate mishap; especially one causing damage or injury
accidents
accident
for drivers or who are
cross
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crossing
the road. The cons of that
,
Accept space
,
delaying delivery sick peoples to hospitals
.
Accept space
.
in
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In
conclusion, the
safety
on roads is the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
responsibility, they should put high measures to protect people and issue laws and rules to organize the vehicle moving
in
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on
the roads
also
punishing irresponsible behaviours from some people.

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