In many countries, mainly tourist, but not local people visit museums and local sites, does this happen, and what can be done to attract more people to visit these places?

Whilst, Art Gallery and historical sites are less attractive for native masses them to tourist. I would discuss about
this
in the following paragraphs
To begin
with, there are myriad reason why I claim that the
first
and an important cause is that, the local people take these places for granted. They think that these places are not running anywhere, so that they will see sooner or later.
Moreover
, people have seldom time for to see these places.
due
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Due
to
this reason individuals
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this reason, individuals
take time from their hectic schedule to watch historical places.
Furthermore
, tourist who come there are on a holiday, and their main motive is visiting
these gallery
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this gallery
these galleries
and historical places.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
I visited Hyderabad tourist and went to see Ramoji Film City which is the biggest Film City
.
Accept space
.
which
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Which
is the biggest Film City in the whole word; my relative who staying in Hyderabad
have never been
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has never been
had never been
there once. When I told them they decided to visit with their children.
In addition
, nothing new is added to these places over the years public who have been there once, do not wish to frequent these places again and again.
However
, museum and historical sites are not cheap to visit in fact visitor are often required to buy expensive tickets. Contrary above the statement super up more mankind coming to
museum
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the museum
. School trips could be organised for children to enjoy these places
.
Accept space
.
a
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A
day free for local mankind art gallery
;
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;
they take interest
on
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in
them.
In
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At
the conclusion, reasons can be given to why lose their and tourism place of exhibition.
However
2 popular the sides among men and women some action should be taken
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