Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some ways. Do you agree or disagree.

Certain individuals think that a hobby is supposed to be hard to some extent for it to be fun. In my opinion, whether a hobby should be difficult
on
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to
not
depends
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depend
on the individual's taste. On the one hand, some people prefer to put their brains always on duty by choosing
tasky
pleasing to the sense of taste
tasty
things to do.
For instance
, most humans who are in engineering or mathematics departments who deal so much
on
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with
calculations would prefer some
tasky
any piece of work that is undertaken or attempted
task
tacky
tasty
leisure activities like playing advanced computer games that
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require
so much
skills
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skill
.
Also
,
Accept space
,
some believe that by engaging in difficult recreational interests, they meet, socialize and make friends with persons of their calibre,
thus
setting
higher standard
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higher standards
a higher standard
for themselves.
On the other hand
, some other persons would want to go for any easy going activity that would not put them to so much stress.
For example
, many grown ups would rather choose to watch sports
such
as soccer on the television than getting themselves involved in playing it.
Furthermore
, others believe that since hobbies are what humans like doing, there should be no need for them to be difficult to those who love them, but to the exceptions who do not have
interest
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an interest
in them.
Finally
, in my own view,
this
decision depends on the kind of a person one is.
For instance
, some subjects and courses are very cheap and easy for certain students in school, but difficult for others, and still, all are chosen by different students. No matter the course one chooses, he/she has reasons for selecting it and would definitely enjoy it,
likewise
leisure activities. In conclusion, despite people's varied thoughts, individual differences always affect
human's
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human
choice, and
this
remains the most vital key factor in determining whether an interest should be hard or not.
Submitted by Esther on

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