You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbor has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain what the problem is Explain why it is disturbing you so much Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

Dear Sir,
This
is to bring to your notice that the new tenants who has occupied the upper floor is creating
hell
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a Hall
a hell
of disturbance with their never ending noise which is
really not accepted
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not really accepted
. They scream
on
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at
to
each other with abusing words.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, the language they utter passes to us very transparently making us feel disgusting.
Also
,
sounds
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the sounds
of ragging heavy objects like bed, chairs, sofa sets,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
creates
lot
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a lot
of commotion bringing
head aches
something or someone that causes anxiety; a source of unhappiness
headaches
. In contrary to our multiple requests, we are asked to enter their house again. Request you to kindly take a serious decision on
this
and let us know at the earliest so that we can plan
further
. Hope to hear from you. Regards,
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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