Artificial intelligence will replace all jobs in the future. What is your opinion ?

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Some people believe artificial
intelligence
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will
compleley
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
dominate the general workforce in the
future
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. Basic
labour
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labours
may completely be replaced by artificial
intelligence
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in the
future
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,
on the other
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hand jobs
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hand, jobs
which require human interaction may not.
This
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essay will discuss why some jobs will always be
preformed
carry out or perform an action
performed
by humans.
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repetitive tasks will most likely be replaced by
robits
a mechanism that can move automatically
robots
in the near
future
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. Humans have a tendency to make mistakes when tasks are boring and repetitive, robots
on the other hand
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will always remain consistent.
For example
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, in Sudan diamond
minning
the act of extracting ores or coal etc from the earth
mining
has entirely been replaced by artificial
intelligence
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.
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,
this
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has dropped the
precentage
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
of
work
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related injuries to nil for these reasons, installation of robots will provide a safer and more efficient
work
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environment. Human interaction is necessary in some occupations, especially in the health sector.
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example, in
psychiatry, the human mind is too complex and volatile for computers to deal with. Human to human interaction is irreplaceable. For
this
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reason, artificial
intelligence
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may never reach the heights of the modern human. To conclude the majority of the general workforce will undoubtedly be replaced by artificial
intelligence
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in the
future
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.
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, mundane and dangerous jobs
willl
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
well
be
tkaen
understood in a certain way; made sense of
taken
over by robots;
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, certain jobs will be
preformed
carry out or perform an action
performed
by humans and humans only. In my opinion, the
future
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requires a
cadwfu
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balance between robots and humans in the
work
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force. Technology has and will continue to help man, but it will never replace the uniqueness
that is
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mankind.
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is vital for all of us to understand the quality of human interactions, and
thus
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respect
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
presence in the
work
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force.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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