Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

   Acquiring a university education has become increasingly important in recent times. While some believe that colleges should teach more of the lessons and skills that will be useful in a work environment, others are of the opinion that tertiary education should focus on the
of study alone. In my opinion, the principal function of a college is to provide and equip students with the
absolutely essential
skills and information to lead productive lives and
to function maximally in their various work environments.     Colleges should teach more practical lessons regardless of the
of study of its students because it provides a well-rounded education as well as making them more employable and useful in
of them or themselves
places of business.
, asides from allowing them to be able to draw inspiration from different sources, it
makes them adaptable to different situations.
For instance
, computer skills, public speaking and other interpersonal skills are
useful to gain employment nowadays.      The notion that only the
of study should be focused on in universities tailors the minds of students to think in one direction which experts say can improve efficiency and skill in that particular field.
is not
in such a manner as could not be otherwise
true as it
breeds myopic individuals who cannot see the bigger picture.
For example
, a very intelligent scientist will not be able to pass his knowledge across effectively if he or she cannot relate well with others or speak in public.     In conclusion, important skills that make people employable regardless of
course of
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course, of
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
as opposed to sticking to the major
outline is still a controversial topic.
, I am of the opinion that life skills should be a part of every
's curriculum in a university as the
any very large body of (salt) water
functions of
institutions is to produce well-grounded minds.
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