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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is avery difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

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It is thought by most people that learning a
nonindigenous
language
 is very
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
.
This
 is justifiable given that
this
 new
language
 is unfamiliar from
then
 the person learnt and got used to
overvtime
work done in addition to regular working hours
overtime
. One of the major
issue
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issues
 with learning an international
language
 is that it is strange from what an individual had been hearing and was taught throughout childhood and adulthood, both at school and at home, and as
such
 making learning of
this
language
extran
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extra n
. Another reason learning an unknown
language
 is assumed stressful is lack of interest
by
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of
 a person towards learning the
language
. It is necessary to note that there are measures to use in learning a new
language
, which includes making foreign languages part of school curriculum for children.
For
instance it
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instance, it
 has been observed that children have the capacity to be multilingual if they are taught different languages at a very tender age.
Also
 for people who lack interest in learning strange languages are made to understand the advantages the will enjoy they understand
this
language
.
For
example who
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example, who
 apply for international jobs stand a greater chance of being employed if they
havean
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have an
 in-depth understanding of the
language
 of that country than those who do not. In conclusion learning
language
 that are far off can be simplified if it is introduced in childhood and the benefits are
also
 emphasized
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