Q. Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education
plays
vital role
Suggestion
a vital role
in everyone’s life, it is commonly believed by some people that, university
education
is very important in order to get appropriate job.
However
, others think gaining work
experience
and development of skills is more important. In my opinion, both have their own positives and
negatives but
Accept comma addition
negatives, but
education
is essential under any circumstances.
Majority
Suggestion
The majority
of people complete their graduation and masters from university to secure employment. Most of the MNC’s and mid-small scale industries hire new employees from universities and colleges.
In addition
to
this
, it is feasible to understand and gain practical knowledge after
education
. With proper
education
it is very easy to understand work while employed in
real world scenario
Suggestion
real world scenarios
a real world scenario
. Why
education
is so important? We can understand by
this
example, people who are having adequate
experience
and skill set without
education
cannot promote on higher positions and not considered for bigger salaries because, market demands
education
.
On the other hand
, gaining
experience
and learning new skills is essential. It is so important to understand work which is only possible by gaining practical understanding and developing skill sets. Practical knowledge makes things easy to understand and enhances abilities which can be used in real time. Why some people believe that
experience
is important?
This
example will elaborate clearly;
everyday
Suggestion
every day
new challenges are taken on
chin
Suggestion
the chin
by project/industrial engineers. In order to face those situations and provide feasible solutions requires
experience
and skills. In conclusion, gaining proper
experience
and learning new skills is so important in real employment practices.
However
, without
education
there is less individual growth in terms of self-development and career,
experience
can be gained after completing college or university
education
.

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