14. Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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294 words

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14. Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree.

Fully explain your ideas

Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities leaving behind an elderly population. What are the problems associated with this? What can be done about it?

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Many historical sites and museums are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these historical sites and museums?