14. Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree.

Modern technology has changed a lot in many
years especially
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years, especially
in
last decade
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the last decade
, which may change how people will alter the
way
how they get
latest news
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the latest news
. Some people think that, it will replace completely traditional Newspapers and Magazines because of the development of advanced tools
such
as internet, mobiles and computers etc.
This
essay will clear why traditional newspapers
are still have
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are still having
same importance
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the same importance
as
old days
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the old days
in
19th century
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the 19th century
. In order to
highpoint
divide or connect with a hyphen
hyphenate
this
, Traditional Newspapers and Magazines
plays
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play
important role in people life, either they
belongs
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belong
to rich or middle class background. In commercial and government offices still Newspapers are
main attraction
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the main attraction
a main attraction
during tea and lunch breaks.
Majority
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The majority
of people still love to read traditional Newspapers and Magazines during morning tea or coffee time. It is one of the cheapest sources of latest information and it can be taken
to
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in
one place to another. Adding to
this
, if we have to access
latest news
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the latest news
on modern technology, we must need to have tools
such
as Mobiles, computers and internet which is
way
more expensive than traditional Newspapers.
However
, Moderns tools changed the
way
how we access news in real time on our fingertips. It has various types
such
as reading mode, audio mode and the best
way
is to watch its online videos, which gives
clear
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clearer
idea than traditional Newspapers.
On the other hand
, People sometimes still prefer
traditional
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the traditional way
way
to get news in order to keep them updated because of its evident advantages as above. To conclude, modern technology changed radically and it made daily-life more easy and updated. Though it cannot completely replace traditional newspapers and Magazines. Newspapers are the
first
invention that made people aware of new information around the world and keep themselves ahead of time always.
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