Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people are of the opinion that allowing an unpleasant circumstance
such
as dissatisfaction with one's work and inadequate funds to stay is the best thing to
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do
Some others think that it is much better to take
actions
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action
to counter
such
circumstances. I believe that as humans, we are in charge of our lives
hence
, we can take steps to make better any unwanted
situation
we find ourselves. On the one hand, individuals who feel that unpleasant
situatuons
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situations
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situation
should be accepted think so because if the tendency for desperation
by
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of
men leading to criminal acts
such
as prostitution, fraud or even robbery. When trying periods present in a man's life, it is best to accept and do nothing about it, rather than go extra mile to act in discordance with the norms of the society.
This
is evident in countries like Singapore which has the lowest crime rate in the world because its citizens are contented with the status quo.
On the other hand
, individuals who opine that it is more beneficial to take actions to change
this
unwanted situations think so because as a higher animal, we possess the ability to struggle and get out of whatever
situation
we do not like which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally agree with.
This
way, depression can be avoided and the trend of poverty in generations can be averted through breakthrough ideas and doing things differently to achieve a different result. To illustrate
,
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,
Dangote who is currently the richest man in Africa changed his own story by gathering ideas,
then
resigning from his former company before starting his own business in the year 1996, and gradually he rose to where he is today. To conclude, accepting an unpleasant
situation
is good, as
individuals can
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individuals, can
avoid being
desperate which
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desperate, which
can lead them to commit
crimes but
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crimes, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that for every
situation
we find ourselves that we detest, we can take bold steps to reverse them.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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