Certain noble prefession like teaching, law and medicine have decreased lately,provide some possible reasons behind this issue with clear examples.

Some cardinal professions were on top of others in the past centuries and anyone who belong to those categories were always recognized all over their world. Some recognized professions like teaching, law and medicine have significantly reduced in recent time.
This
essay will discuss the rationales for the decline in acclimation for these professions.
To begin
with, learning pathway to
this
professions
Suggestion
profession
from centuries ago still remains the same as well as
studying
Suggestion
study
studies
bulky academic materials continuously, looks boring to the new generations of people which makes them to
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
interest in studying
such
courses in higher institutions.
For instance
,
medicine
Suggestion
medical
students in the University of Ife, in Nigeria hardly have time for leisure, they
spends
Suggestion
spend
a significant number of their time in class receiving lectures, reading in the library, discussing in tutorial classes and practical work on the ward.
Furthermore
, while it is obvious that some students gets lesser grades in their
higher
Suggestion
high
schools, which fails to meet the requirements to be admitted into
such
courses in the University,
hence
, lesser number of applicants will eventually make the admission. In spite of
this
, its popularity will drop. Civilisation
on the other hand
, increases the popularity of
entrepreneurship which
Accept comma addition
entrepreneurship, which
encopasses
include in scope; include as part of something broader; have as one's sphere or territory
encompasses
encompass
, arts, fashion, beauty movie and much more. These,
however
, satisfies financial needs of people with less academic effort compared to those noble precessions, and
beside
in addition to; as well as
besides
, people tend to
derived
Suggestion
derive
pleasure in what they do and still be recognized anywhere in the world. Example of
this
is, Davido, a Nigeria local RMB singer, who is a university graduate and end up singing To sum up,
this
essay argued the reason for
decline
Suggestion
declines
the decline
in some noble professions like teaching, law and medicine recently,
also
explained other occupation that rock the world.

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