People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance. Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focusing on physical appearance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Face is the index of

mind

Suggestion

the mind

which is truly believed and followed by many people to

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

the

oppposite

being directly across from each other; facing

opposite

person's strategies', behaviours, etc.

Inroder

Suggestion

Intruder

to understand an individual, his or her attitude counts

alot

Suggestion

a lot

, after all the appearance matters so high too. In

the modern

Suggestion

the Modern

World, people pay much attention to fantasies like make-up, hair styles, dressing and other maintenances so that they can showcase themselves in the best way. And for

this

, they spend a lot of money on

parlors

reception room in an inn or club where visitors can be received

parlours

, shopping, following the trend.

Infact

Suggestion

In fact

, some folks take loans for beauty surgeries like modifying the nose, skin, mouth,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

in their desired way, as it costs a lot. They don't even have a

second

thought for

such

liabilities and would rather poke others

also

to follow them to exhibit themselves.

For example

, many actors and actresses like Sridevi, Ram Charan Tej, Rekha and so on show utmost interest for dispensing money in a splendid manner for increasing their beauty. Sridevi,

for plastic

Accept comma addition

for, plastic

surgery

Suggestion

her nose, Ram Charan the same operation for his mouth and chin, Rekha for her skin not exposing her age with wrinkles.

This

has

also

become a fashion of decreasing the obesity, putting up the weight and many more,

whihc

interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

which

is never ending. But, it has to be remembered that, outside looks may not always be true to which widely varies from the inner sense of mind. Our words and thoughts should match the output that we bestow.

Nevertheless

, understanding the consequences said above, I strongly feel not to be artificial but to be natural which,

infact

Suggestion

in fact

, brings perfect results and ends up with positive relations.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Aesthetic appeal
Body image
Consumer culture
Grooming habits
Personal identity
Professional demeanor
Psychological well-being
Self-esteem
Social comparison
Societal standards

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