People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance. Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focusing on physical appearance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Face is the index of
the mind
which is truly believed and followed by many people to
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
being directly across from each other; facing
person's strategies', behaviours, etc.
to understand an individual, his or her attitude counts
a lot
, after all the appearance matters so high too. In
the modern
the Modern
World, people pay much attention to fantasies like make-up, hair styles, dressing and other maintenances so that they can showcase themselves in the best way. And for
, they spend a lot of money on
reception room in an inn or club where visitors can be received
, shopping, following the trend.
In fact
, some folks take loans for beauty surgeries like modifying the nose, skin, mouth,
continuing in the same way
in their desired way, as it costs a lot. They don't even have a
thought for
liabilities and would rather poke others
to follow them to exhibit themselves.
For example
, many actors and actresses like Sridevi, Ram Charan Tej, Rekha and so on show utmost interest for dispensing money in a splendid manner for increasing their beauty. Sridevi,
for plastic
Accept comma addition
for, plastic
her nose, Ram Charan the same operation for his mouth and chin, Rekha for her skin not exposing her age with wrinkles.
become a fashion of decreasing the obesity, putting up the weight and many more,
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
is never ending. But, it has to be remembered that, outside looks may not always be true to which widely varies from the inner sense of mind. Our words and thoughts should match the output that we bestow.
, understanding the consequences said above, I strongly feel not to be artificial but to be natural which,
in fact
, brings perfect results and ends up with positive relations.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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