Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A majority of people think that acceptance
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of difficulties, including unexpected job or miserable living conditions, is better; while the other groups, who are with opposite viewpoint, say that they should make great effort to overcome obstacles and qualify their lives. From my perspective, I strongly believe people with self-development and attempt to get higher achievements have
more valuable
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most valuable
contributions. On the one hand, many people
satisfy
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are satisfied
with their current bad
status
Accept comma addition
status, although
although
they have never had
desire
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a desire
for it when they were younger.
This
can stem from the fear of failure and new challenges since they do not want to change their constant lives. These people have a tendency to protect themselves in traditional things and spend most of their spare time on their private hobbies and extended families.
Additionally
,
this
type of people
usually have
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usually has
hugely financial burdens on their shoulders,
such
as bank debt or monthly expenditure on children.
As a result
, they find it difficult to pursue their dreams.
On the other hand
, it is needless to say that there is a great number of optimistic individuals who have been continuing expanding their abilities and never give up. They know that the sky is the limit;
therefore
, their seamless attempt can enhance their lives
in
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at
higher quality levels and bring not only them, but
also
their loving
families
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family's
family
happiness. I must admit that
this
type of individuals has big ambition about career path as well as income. To them, if their current job cannot give them
new experience
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new experiences
a new experience
and higher promotion or salary, they will not hesitate to leave those companies. In conclusion,
although
many people have
acceptable attitude
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an acceptable attitude
acceptable attitudes
toward their current lives, in my own opinion, we should believe that people can change obstacles into strength and with our huge effort, capable individuals can overcome any tough challenges.
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