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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

#countries #environment #level
Although
 environmental problems are occurring throughout the world, it is worse in some countries like India and China. The
pollution
 and CO2 emissions from these countries is at
such
 a high
level
 that it makes sense to improve these conditions at the local
level
 to reduce its impact at the international
level
 Some countries like India and China are major contributors of the environmental
pollution
. So, it makes sense to reduce the
pollution
 in these countries to reduce
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 impact at an international
level
. It is highly unlikely to completely eradicate these issues in some countries, but various steps and measures to reduce the pollutants can be taken to
atleast
Suggestion
at least
 reduce the impact by some
level
. Some climate issues like air
pollution
 is so bad in some countries, that it's almost impossible to protect the environment by simply taking the measures locally. One of the major reasons might be high population in these countries. So, in these cases, the only viable solution seems to be reducing the air pollutants in other countries internationally. To conclude, some countries may be having very serious issues with saving environment, but we should try to protect it at both national and international
level
Suggestion
levels
.
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