nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

There is a tendency that many people want to create their own
businees
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
which without involve in group or team. It is clear that we could find out some reasons which cause
this
trend and
also
many potential of being self-employed.
First
of all, there are various reasons which are encouraging people to
seclect
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
select
their own employments. One of the main reasons is that working nowadays is under high pressure not only from
cilents
a person who seeks the advice of a lawyer
clients
but
also
by employers, owing to the fact in terms of workers they are
facing
Suggestion
faced
with a host of depression,
tention
(psychology) a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense
tension
attention
tensions
and anxiety everyday which lead to unbalance in their lives.
Therefore
, many labours want to get rid of being under control by others, creating own business is a solution for it.
Furthermore
, as we know most of people work for
organization
Suggestion
an organization
or company would gain a certain
salaries
Suggestion
salary
, but when they establish their own employments many people might achieve
briliant
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
earning. Having said
that being
Accept comma addition
that, being
self-
employmend
having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary
employed
has a lot of risks which businessman are concerned during working. Generally speaking, working as ourselves
is not guarantee
Suggestion
does not guarantee
doesn't guarantee
the monthly earning, in the other
words if
Accept comma addition
words, if
we could not come up with
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
ideas for work and there are no products for a long time, we might not receive money and become bankrupt.
Additionally
, being a boss without control by
others might
Accept comma addition
others, might
give people too much space and they are easily getting distractions from close relationships
such
as families and friends.
Thus
, job performance would turn out worse if compared with normal workers. In conclusion, freedom to make own decision about work is really great,
however
, there are many potential dangers which people should take into account in a careful way.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: