nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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There is a tendency that many people want to create their own

businees

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

businesses

which without involve in group or team. It is clear that we could find out some reasons which cause

this

trend and

also

many potential of being self-employed.

First

of all, there are various reasons which are encouraging people to

seclect

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

select

their own employments. One of the main reasons is that working nowadays is under high pressure not only from

cilents

a person who seeks the advice of a lawyer

clients

but

also

by employers, owing to the fact in terms of workers they are

facing

Suggestion

faced

with a host of depression,

tention

(psychology) a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense

tension

attention

tensions

and anxiety everyday which lead to unbalance in their lives.

Therefore

, many labours want to get rid of being under control by others, creating own business is a solution for it.

Furthermore

, as we know most of people work for

organization

Suggestion

an organization

or company would gain a certain

salaries

Suggestion

salary

, but when they establish their own employments many people might achieve

briliant

of surpassing excellence

brilliant

earning. Having said

that being

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that, being

self-

employmend

having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary

employed

has a lot of risks which businessman are concerned during working. Generally speaking, working as ourselves

is not guarantee

Suggestion

does not guarantee

doesn't guarantee

the monthly earning, in the other

words if

Accept comma addition

words, if

we could not come up with

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

ideas for work and there are no products for a long time, we might not receive money and become bankrupt.

Additionally

, being a boss without control by

others might

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others, might

give people too much space and they are easily getting distractions from close relationships

such

as families and friends.

Thus

, job performance would turn out worse if compared with normal workers. In conclusion, freedom to make own decision about work is really great,

however

, there are many potential dangers which people should take into account in a careful way.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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self-employed
company
organization
freedom
independence
income potential
flexibility
working hours
working location
passions
interests
decision-making
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nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Fully explain your ideas

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As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problem does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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These days undocumented immigrants are a big problem. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?