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The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.
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, mandarin
chinese
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 is the biggest
language
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 in total users in the world. Meanwhile, immediately after it,
english
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 is 2nd most popular with great
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number
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a number
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 of
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 as an additional
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. Hindi, Spanish, Arabic and Portuguese fall behind them.
According to
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 in the
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 of native
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 plus 190
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speakers
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 of an additional
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 lead mandarin
chinese
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 to the 1st rank in
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number
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 of
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 with 1090
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.
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 the figure
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first
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language
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english
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 is 339
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,
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, only
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 has the
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 of
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 as an additional
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 bigger than native
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with
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almost double in the quantity
with
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of
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 603
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. the figure
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speakers
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 in both
first
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the first
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 and additional
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portuguese
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 is the lowest with 203
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 and 10
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 , respectively.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words language, number, speakers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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