children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past , which reduces theirs activity levels accordingly. why is this the case? what measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

According to some statistics, children pay too much attention on
tv
programes
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
programmers
instead
of physical activities. In
this
essay, we might figure out some reasons which caused
this
situation and
reveral
make visible
reveal
solutions as well. It is undeniable that children are spending on watching
TV
a remarkable
time
of a day.
Perhap
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Perhaps
, there are some reasons why they do less physical activities and watch more
tv
programmes now. Generally speaking, media
nowdays
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now days
is
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are
much more attractive than in the past with
variety
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a variety
of
type
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types
. One of the main reasons is that producers have created a lot of fascinating shows on
TV
which attract children to stay
on
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in
their chairs for a long
time
.
For example
, my little sister who
have
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has
passion
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a passion
on
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for
romatic
belonging to or characteristic of Romanticism or the Romantic Movement in the arts
romantic
films could lay on her bed whole day to watch some series films like that. Another reason is that children do not have enough space to do their
activitives
any specific behavior
activities
because of regardless by adults. In many cases, lack of aids for children from governments who just focus on
make
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making
profit from elder people leads to children
feel
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to feel
boring with infrastructure in their areas.. The interesting point here is that people could encourage
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
with numerous methods. Apparently, parents and teachers actually can help children decrease their
time
alongside with
tv
by help them realise some negative impacts of watching too much
tv
and lack of exercises
such
as eye sight problems, losing of muscles.
Additionally
, parents should pay more attention
on
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to
their children or give a strict
time
to watch
tv
per day.
Furthermore
,
school
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a school
the school
might create some outside activities in the
weekend which
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weekend, which
gather children and give some games to play together. In conclusion, the trend recently could raise some
potential
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potentially
serious
prolems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
when children do not as active as previous generations. Not only
parents but
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parents, but
also
schools and other factors might help children comprehend their situation and get rid of it.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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